The following acronym should help
Subject and theme(s)
Tone(s)
Rhythm (and rhyme in poems where appropriate)
Imagery
Diction
Evaluation
Form and Structure and other areas such as onomatopoeia, alliteration, enjambment, assonance, symbolism, etc. should also be noted for the meaning that it adds to this and other poems.
Remember that Lawrence thought that a poem's form was determined by the emotional patterns caused by the feelings of the narrator. The lingering, pauses and rhythm (pace) is essential for meaning. Of course, other literary texts, for instance, Genesis, John Milton's "Paradise Lost" and S.T. Coleridge's "Rime of the Ancient Mariner" are are also alluded to in